What To Read When You’re Writing

The next book you read can make revising your own novel easier or harder.

Most writers are strongly influenced by what they read and when. Sometimes you’re aware of it.

For instance, Margaret Atwood said that when she came up with the concept for A Handmaid’s Tale, she realized it required her to to write dystopian science fiction. She read dozens of sci-fi novels to become more familiar with the genre.

Other times it’s unconscious, such as when another author’s style creeps into your prose.

You don’t notice as you write, but when you return to a first draft after having set it aside for a while, you see a shift in style, level of detail, or dialogue rhythm that reflects what you were reading as you worked on different parts of the manuscript.

Because of that, it’s worth choosing books that influence your writing in a positive way.

Know Your Strengths And Weaknesses

To make a good choice, you need to understand the strengths and weakness of your draft. That usually requires some distance.

For me, setting a first draft aside for 2-3 weeks is ideal, though I’ll let it rest longer if I need to work on something else anyway, and I’ll take a shorter time away if I’m on a deadline.

Regardless, when you read the draft with fresh eyes, think about plot, pace, character development, dialogue, and scene level detail.

Ask yourself which aspect is strongest and what needs the most work.

Below are some thoughts on what to read to help the revision process.

Plot

For strong plots, genre books like suspense, mystery, horror, thrillers, and romance are good choices. These books usually have strong, clear plot outlines you can see if you pay attention when you reread.

When I was trying to get a better handle on plotting, I reread Stephen King’s The Dead Zone and wrote an outline of it. (I later read an interview where King said that was one of the few novels he outlined before writing.)

Watching movies and noting what happens in the beginning and at each quarter point in the film also can be very helpful. A major plot turn typically happens at the 1/4, 1/2, and 3/4 point.

You can easily see this in The Dead Zone, in the film The Terminator, or in the book or film Gone With The Wind.

Characterization

For character development, I like Pat Conroy’s novels, as he delves deeply into his characters’ lives. The Prince Of Tides and The Lords Of Discipline are two excellent choices. Read either book to see how backstory plays into the plots.

Gone Girl also is an excellent book for character development (and plot for that matter).

Regardless whether you like horror, Stephen King develops his characters in great depth. That’s what I love most about his work. The Stand and It show how really knowing the characters makes the stories pay off.

Prose

If you feel your prose is too wordy, read any John Sandford book to help achieve a clear, clean style. In a single line, Sandford can do more to set a scene or portray a character than most writers get across in an entire page.

My very old copy of Gone With The Wind

On the other hand, if your writing tends to be too sparing, again go back to Pat Conroy. He writes beautiful description and, in his best work, does it without distracting from the story.

Gone With The Wind is also a great choice for describing scenes and characters in a textured way that draws on all the senses.

Dialogue

For engaging, fast-paced dialogue that reveals character, one of the best choices is Jane Austen’s Pride And Prejudice.

Any play by David Mamet is a good choice. For TV, Joss Whedon, creator of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, also has an excellent ear for dialogue.

Pace

The pace of your novel or story is best addressed toward the end of the revision process. For that, you’ll usually want to read books that fall within your genre.

If you’re writing a thriller, read books praised by reviewers as page turners. If you’re writing literary, immerse yourself in your favorite literary novels, which generally allow for a far more leisurely pace.

One caveat on pacing—when you choose your examples, consider how established the writer’s fan base is.

Going back to Stephen King, while It is a wonderful example of characterization, on first read, I found the first half of the book far too slow. I had the same reaction to The Stand (and that was the less lengthy edition that was initially published, not the later extended version).

Because I already loved King’s books, I stuck with both and found I was glad I knew the characters so well. Had I not already been a huge King fan, though, I might not have finished either book.

In other words, if you’re aiming to draw in new readers, you may need to pick up the pace a bit more than does an author who already has readers eagerly buying the next book.

What do you like to read when you’re writing? Feel free to share in the comments or via email.

Until Friday—

L.M. Lilly

P.S. For more on the plot points referred to above, including an analysis of the stories mentioned, check out Super Simple Story Structure: A Quick Guide To Plotting And Writing Your Novel.

Boosting International Sales Of Your Books

It’s easy to focus on marketing and selling your books mainly in the country where you live, especially for those of us who grew up when print ruled the world and it was hard to buy books from another country.

These days, though, many authors make a significant portion of their sales from readers who live in countries other than their own.

As this article from BookBub explains, there’s a lot you can do to increase international exposure of your work. First, be sure to make your work available on the platforms popular in the countries you hope to reach. For instance, Kobo is the most popular e-reader in Canada, so if you publish only on Kindle, you’re missing a lot of readers.

Another is to target your advertising to particular countries.

Just yesterday, I placed my first Facebook ad for the 4-book Box Set for my Awakening supernatural thriller series. I decided to try targeting readers in Canada who like Dean Koontz and similar authors and who listed interests that included e-readers, Kobo, or reading. It’s too early to say how it’s going, but my readership in Canada has been growing, so I figured it was a good way to start my ads.

For more on growing your international sales, check out the BookBub article:

How to Market Your Book to Get Worldwide Exposure

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

Author Beware

If you’re publishing your own work or planning to, there are companies and individuals out there looking to make money off of you.

That’s not necessarily bad. Professional cover designers and editors, for instance, provide a valuable service that authors should expect to pay for.

Unfortunately, though, some individuals and companies offer services at prices far higher than their value, make promises they can’t keep, or are out-and-out scamming authors.

That’s why this Friday I’m recommending two sites to check when you’re contemplating spending money on publishing, David Gaughran’s website and the Alliance of Independent Authors’ Self-Publishing Advice Centre.

The Alliance of Independent Authors (ALLi) provides advice on writing, marketing, book rights and contracts, book design and formatting, and more.

You can use the Search function on the self-publishing advice page to search for a particular company or type of service, or you can click on a specific topic to scroll through information. (You can also search on the specific topic pages.) You don’t need to be a member to read any of this information.

David Gaughran also regularly writes about topics to help indie/self-published authors succeed. Recent topics include improving results with ads on Amazon, scammers in the Kindle store, and the importance of making sure your book is exclusive to Kindle Unlimited if you participate in that program.

He also exposes services that are bad deals for authors. As with ALLi, you can use the search function on his site to see if he’s written about a company or service you’re considering paying.

Have you found a site that’s particularly helpful in calling out services, individuals, or companies that may be taking advantage of indie authors? If so, please share it in the comments.

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

Improving Your Dialogue

Writing dialogue is a challenge for most writers. There’s making it sound “real” or “natural” without it actually sounding the way people talk, which includes constant “uhs,” incomplete thoughts, and sentences that make no sense.

(I discovered that last one in my law practice when I read transcripts of testimony. I was surprised how often people say things that everyone understands in the moment but that is confusing or incomprehensible when read later.)

Then there’s the rhythm and musicality of great dialogue. Read or watch a David Mamet play (Glengarry Glen Ross, Oleanna) or Aaron Sorkin show (West Wing, The Newsroom, Sports Night) for great examples of that.

Also, there’s character. Just as people don’t all talk the same way, your characters should sound different from one another. This difference is not only about how they speak but what they say.

All of which is why this Friday I’m recommending you check out this podcast episode from How Story Works on Character & Dialogue:

https://chipperish.com/2017/09/18/hsw-25-character-dialogue/

Have a great weekend!

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

Listening To Jim And Bryan Talk About KOBO And Audiobooks

A while back I wrote about earning additional income from a book you’ve published in ebook format by an creating an audiobook. At the time, the only way indie authors I knew were doing so was through ACX, an Amazon-related company.

The latest option on this front, though, is KOBO. Because for my Awakening series, I entered ACX-exclusive contracts, those books will stay with ACX for seven years each.

If you’re starting out, though, you may want to explore other options, which is why I recommend listening to this week’s Sell More Books Show.

Each episode is always valuable, so I recommend listening to all of it. If you’re short on time, though, and are particularly interested in audiobooks, you could skip to No. 2 of the Top 5 News items. You’ll find it 44:51 minutes into the podcast.

But, again, definitely worth listening to the whole show. It includes Amazon’s efforts to deal with scammers, info on making Amazon Ads pay, and tons of other great tips.

Episode 180 – Kobo Audiobooks, AMS Advice, and Scammer Crackdowns

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

Character And Personality Theories

If you get stuck as you’re creating your characters, try checking out some of the theories of personality and/or personality quizzes on line.

One I’ve found especially helpful is the personality type theory of C.G. Jung as used in the work of Isabel Briggs Myers and Katharine C. Briggs.

The four aspects of personality Myers and Briggs talk about are:

• Extraverted/Introverted (E or I)

• Intuiton/Sensing (N or S)

• Thinking/Feeling (I or F)

• Perceiving/Judging (P or J)

Check out these descriptions of the different traits and combinations of traits. Creating characters who fall at opposite ends of the scales for them is a good way to ensure enough conflict in your stories.

Some other personality theories and inventories you may want to check out include:

  • The Big Five Personality Domains, which covers Extroversion; Agreeableness; Conscientiousness; Neuroticism/Emotional Stability; Openness to Experience
  • The Hexaco Personality Inventory, which focuses on Honesty-Humility; Emotionality; Extroversion; Agreeableness/Anger; Conscientiousness; and Openness to Experience.
  • Enneagrams, which divide people into 9 personality types such as Adaptive Peacemaker and Quiet Specialist.

Regardless whether you think these approaches are accurate for people in real life, they can help you figure out your characters.

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

P.S. For more on character development, you can check out my new release Creating Compelling Characters From The Inside Out.

Writing A Book Description For Your Sales Page

One of the toughest things for self-published writers, especially novelists, is to write sales copy for your book. I say “especially for novelists” because we’re used to writing long. If you’re like me, even your short stories tend to top 20,000 words.

Also, most of us never had training in copywriting, and writing a book blurb that will sell seems as foreign as being asked to come up with a magazine ad or television commercial.

That’s why I recommend Bryan Cohen’s How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis: A Step-by-Step System for Enticing New Readers, Selling More Fiction, and Making Your Books Sound Good.

As the subtitle suggests, the book provides clear, simple steps you can use to write a gripping description of your novel. I found the exercises extremely helpful. Best of all, the way Bryan Cohen broke the process down alleviated my anxiety about writing a good description.

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

If You Read One Book On Marketing This Year…

If you only have time to read one book this year on marketing, the latest edition of How To Market A Book should be it.

Here’s why:

Information Without Overload

Reading the book feels like sitting down and chatting with the author, Joanna Penn.

Penn covers in depth multiple ways to market your book, which could easily be overwhelming. But in her intro, closing, and throughout she makes clear that you can’t do all of it, and that not every approach works or feels right to every author.

I really appreciated that because it seems every day I’m reading or hearing about something I “should” be doing to sell or market. This book includes them all, expertly breaking them down while acknowledging that it’s okay to not do some of it.

How To Market A Book: Sell More Books, Reach More Readers

Overall Marketing Principles

How To Market A Book (3rd edition) challenges marketing myths and shares marketing guidelines in the first part, which includes an overview of discoverability and other big-picture issues.

Even if you’re familiar with many of these already, it’s worth reading for a quick, clear overview.

Fundamentals For Success

The second part of the book gets into specifics like choosing categories and keywords for your book, pluses and minuses of publishing your ebook edition exclusively with Amazon, and pricing.

Each point includes detailed, specific information you can put into practice right away.

Short-Term Marketing

Part 3 covers short-term marketing issues like getting reviews and using paid advertising. This part is especially valuable because you can implement these strategies whether or not you have an author website or platform. I only finished the book last week but already I’ve referred back to some of the topics.

Building A Platform

The next section focuses on long-term marketing by building your author brand.

It includes specific, practical advice on building a website, email marketing, blogging, podcasting, book trailers, PR, and more. I plan to use the podcasting section as a step-by-step How To guide if my plans for a starting movie podcast next year come to fruition.

Book Launches

The last section details book launches, addressing differences between indie and traditionally-published authors, soft launches, relaunches, and numerous other things you need to know.

You’ll also find a launch checklist, which is another example of how practical and clear the advice in How To Market A Book is.

The book also includes an appendix with questions to answer if your book isn’t selling. It functions as a perfect recap of everything covered, and I plan to review it every few months as a refresher.

Until Sunday–

L.M. Lilly

P.S. I’m gradually building a list of helpful books on writing. If there are any you think should be added, please note them in the comments or email me: [email protected]

 

Finding The Right Writing Conference Or Retreat For You

Crooked Lake at Rabbit Hole Retreat.

The title of this Friday’s post/recommendation is long, partly because the topic–choosing a writing retreat or conference–is more involved than it first appears.

I decided to post about choosing a retreat or conference because I’m on a creative retreat now. My first idea was to find and link to a comprehensive list describing multiple events and listing the location and cost for each.

It turns out a list of writing conferences, though, is (1) not that hard to find and (2) not that helpful.

Each conference or retreat has pluses and minuses, but those vary depending upon your goals. Likewise, which ones will be most helpful will depend as much on where you are in your writing career as on the quality of the retreat.

Playing Mysterium at the Rabbit Hole Retreat.

So before you do an Internet search or find a listing in a magazine of conferences, I suggest reading this article from The Write Life.

It discusses (a) the difference between a conference and a retreat, (b) general events versus genre-specific ones, (c) fitting your trip into your budget, and (d) figuring out your personal goals for the event.

Rainy day on Rabbit Hole Retreat.

Until Sunday, when I’ll share more on how to make the most of a creative retreat

L.M. Lilly

Yoga And Your Writer’s Body

This Friday’s recommendation is not an article to read or a show to listen to.

It’s a suggestion on caring for your body, especially if you work at a job that, like writing, involves time at a keyboard.

Even if we’re careful about posture (and how many of us always are?), if we type a lot during the day for work and then come home to type some more we’re repeating the same motions over and over.

Our hands and shoulders are forward. If we’re not careful, our head may thrust forward as well. Depending on where our screen is in relation to our eyes, our neck may be angled up or down.

If, like me, you’re a fairly fast typist, that may make it all worse. On the one hand, I love that I type quickly by touch. It’s as if I think and the words appear on screen.

Unfortunately, though, being a fast typist makes it harder to remember to interrupt my repetitive motions and instead reach for a mouse or shift position.

For instance, despite the mouse on my left, my default is to navigate using arrows keys on the right. That causes a knot in my right shoulder. The pain shoots up my neck and, on a bad day, can trigger a migraine.

To help alleviate strain, some writers use dictation software, standing desks, or do detailed outlines or early drafts by hand.

Massages, ice or heat, and physical therapy also can be effective.

One of the best ways I’ve found to counter the strain to my neck and shoulders is yoga. Many of the simplest poses are designed to open up the body, counteracting the rounding of the shoulders and releasing the muscles there.

Yoga also encourages better posture and strengthens the muscles that help achieve that.

Most days I do a 25-minute yoga routine, but I’ve found that as little as 15 minutes a day makes a big difference in how well I feel and how long I can write without pain.

There are courses and videos available all over the Internet. I use a series of DVDs by Namaste Yoga and occasionally attend in-person classes. Many books on yoga specifically address neck and back issues.

What exercise works best for you and is right for your body is, of course, something only you can decide, and you should check with your healthcare provider before undertaking a new routine.

Until Sunday, when I’ll talk about Canva, a website that helps you create graphics–

L.M. Lilly